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Sunday 31 May 2015

My submission to creative writing course of Symbiosis- II

Introduction to Creative Forms of Writing

Prepare a report on different creative forms of writing

Literature is a broad term that encompasses almost all written work. Though certain definitions include oral works also. It helps to break forms of writing down into categories, for ease of understanding and analysis. Here are four commonly accepted creative forms of writing:
1.      Poetry
2.      Drama
3.      Prose fiction
4.      Essay/non-fiction

Poetry
Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. - William Wordsworth.

A text is a poem when it has some sort of rhythm, and when it focuses on the way the words sound when put together. Poems are heavy in imagery and metaphor, and are often made up of fragments and phrases rather than complete, grammatically correct sentences. And poetry is nearly always written in stanzas and lines, creating a unique look on the page.

An example of poetry is Emily Dickinson's 'I Felt a Funeral in my Brain'
I felt a Funeral, in my Brain,
And Mourners to-and-fro,
Kept treading - treading - till it seemed,
That Sense was breaking through -
And when they all were seated,
A Service, like a,
Drum - Kept beating - beating - till I thought,
My Mind was going numb.

Poetry is often considered the oldest form of literature. Before writing was invented, oral stories were commonly put into some sort of poetic form to make them easier to remember and recite.

There are different types in which poetry is generally classified. These include- sonnet, elegy, ode, allegory, lyrics.

Drama
Drama consists of theatrical dialogues performed on stage. Dramas are usually called plays.

When written down the bulk of a drama is dialogue. Since dramas are meant to be acted out in front of an audience, it’s hard to fully appreciate them when looking only at pages of text.

There are various accepted types of drama – tragedy, comedy, melodrama, tragicomedy. Even these types have various sub types. For example comedies can be romantic comedy, satiric comedy, comedy of manners, restoration comedy, farce, comedy and a number of others.

A play consists of certain basic elements – plot, character, setting and theme. These elements together with the imagination of writer constitute dramas.

Some examples of drama are – Othello by William Shakespeare, The importance of being earnest by Oscar Wilde, Death of Salesman by Arthur Miller.
Prose fiction
Prose fiction is an imaginary story written down in everyday, natural language. It lets people leave reality, exploring characters and events that typically are limited only by the scope of the writer’s imagination. It generally uses a variety of techniques such as narrative and has a wide range in terms of length.
Prose is written in complete sentences and organized in paragraphs. Instead of focusing on sound, which is what poetry does, prose tends to focus on plot and characters.
Prose is broken down into a large number of other sub-genres. Some of these genres revolve around the structure of the text, such as novellas, biographies, and memoirs, and others are based on the subject matter, like romances, fantasies, and mysteries.
Generally speaking, there are three genres of prose fiction – i) Short fiction or short story ii) Novella or short novel iii) Novel.
Short stories are short in length. They have a maximum length of upto four to five thousand words. The short story has its origins in fables and myths, stories that were not sprawling epics but concise tales containing only a few characters and often a single focused message. Examples are 'The Tortoise and the Hare' or the myth of Icarus.
Examples of some famous short stories are -   "Signs and Symbols" by Vladimir Nabokov, I, Robot by Issac Asimov, Three Questions" by Leo Tolstoy etc.
The novella lies between the short story and the novel in terms of length and scope. Some of the most famous examples are – George Orwell’s Animal Farm, Jack London’s The Call of the Wild, Joseph Cornad’s Heart of darkness.
The novella lies between the short story and the novel in terms of length and scope. Some of the most famous examples are – George Orwell’s Animal Farm, Jack London’s The Call of the Wild, Joseph Cornad’s Heart of darkness.
Novel is like an endless canvas to a writer. Its length, characters, plots can be as huge, numerous and complex as the writer wishes. Novels in simpler words are full length work of fiction. Novels are found in various forms. Some of them are – spy novel, science fiction novel, romance novel, historical novel, thriller novel, fantasy novel, autobiographical novel etc. These forms depend upon the literary, social, cultural and economic conditions of that particular time. Few examples of novels are – Ulysses by James Joyce,  Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen, War and Peace by Leo Tolstoy etc.                                                                                                                                      
Essay/Non fiction
Essay or non fiction writing is the most common form of writing in the present world. Most of the articles of newspaper, magazines, and pamphlets belong to this form of writing. With the advent of printing and popularisation of media, this form has gained popularity. In the age of digital communication and social media, the blogs, wall posts etc constitute the nonfiction form of writing. Comic books, graphic novels, scientific journals are some other types of writings.

Which specific form of literature do you like most and why?

Out of all forms of literature discussed above, I like short stories the most.
The short story has a limitation of length, but in the modern world it is the biggest advantage with it. They can convey a variety of emotions and ideas in minimum words. They are interesting to read and quick to give satisfaction to the readers.
The short story can be very educative with the most simplistic plot. “The toys of peace” by Saki is a perfect example for that. In this story, Eleanor and her brother Harvey are influenced by a newspaper article which suggested giving children ‘peace toys’ instead of gun and battlefield toys. On Easter, Harvey brought such peace toys to his nephews Bertie and Eric. The toys included a municipal dustbin, a model of YMCA building, and figures of some distinguished citizens. The nephews were not interested in them and the end of story they turn the models into forts and the citizens into soldiers. The siblings rue the fact that perhaps they are too late to make the change.  This short story gave a strong message on how toys to children are shaping the mindset of our future citizens.
But the beauty of short stories is that sometimes a simple looking plot also opens up a scope of varied interpretation. “Luck” by Mark Twain is an example of that. The author meets the reverend at a function organised in honour of lieutenant general Scoresby. There he is told about Scoresby by the reverend that “privately-he’s an absolute fool”. The author meets the reverend later to hear the story of ‘luck’. The reverend was a instructor in a military academy where Scoresby was getting training. He was weak in his studies and the reverend helped him cram up some questions before the test which luckily was the questions asked to Scoresby. He passed with flying colours. The reverend helped him throughout his career to hide his blunders as a mark of genius. According to reverend, the war with Russians was also won by Scoresby by luck as he confused with the directions left or right. The story looks simple but whether Twain is talking about luck and foolishness of Scoresby or the jealousy and failure of the reverend? Such open endedness makes short stories interesting.
The short story can be based on a single theme and yet convey a lot of information about certain time period. “Counterparts” by James Joyce can be quoted in this regard. Farrington is a copy clerk is scolded by one the partners of the law firm Mr. Alleyne for not making complete copies of a document in time. Farrington is infuriated by this and he pawns his watch-chain for drinking alcohol in the pub. Here he is humiliated by a perceived slight by an elegant young woman and defeat in an arm-wrestling contest. Frustrated by this, he goes home and beats up his son. This whole story is based on the frustration of Farrington. But the story also tells about Irish conditions in those days. Farrington's coworkers at the law firm have English and  non-Irish names (Parker, Higgins, Shelley, Delacour), and just before arriving at home in Sandymount, Farrington passes the barracks where English soldiers live. In the last scene of "Counterparts," when Farrington begins to beat him, the boy desperately offers "I'll say a Hail Mary for you . . . "
Even in the short span of length these stories do an excellent characterization. “The Duchess and the Jeweller” by Virginia Woolf is a short story about Oliver, a poor man who has become a successful jeweler, and his interaction with a Duchess. The relationship between Oliver and the Duchess is confirmed in Oliver's acknowledgement that “They were friends, yet enemies; he was master, she was mistress; each cheated the other, each needed the other, each feared the other... “. Oliver’s even talks to his dead mother’s picture and they show a different characterization altogether.
Short stories are also deeply engaging and make us wonder about various topics. “The Dream” by Somerset Maugham tells the story of a Russian whom the author meets. The wife of the Russian was having a dream that she is killed by her husband. She regularly saw this dream and one day she was found dead for real. The story doesn’t conclude on who killed her but it left many questions in the reader’s mind.
Thus short stories are small packets of meaningful communication.

My submission to creative writing course of Symbiosis- I



Preparatory Practices

What does the poet mean when he says, “The world is too much with us”?

“The world is so much with us” was written by William Wordsmith in the context of the industrial revolution. He was reflecting on the changes taking place in the contemporary English society. The increased industrialization and consumerism had left little time for the people to appreciate the beauty of the nature.
The word ‘world’ in the line ‘the world is too much with us’ refers to the city life. World here means the modern industrialized urban part of the world. It doesn’t include the natural world still untouched by urbanization. Hence a distinction is made by Wordsmith between the natural and man made world.
 When it is referred ‘too much with us’, it means that people are too occupied with city life. They waste their time in ‘getting things and spending money’. Consumerism has become the central theme of human existence.  ‘Too much with us’ can be literally be interpreted as being ‘excessive’ and ‘more than required’.
Hence ‘the world is too much with us’ means that people are spending too much time on materialistic world and the poet  is fed up with that. He wants the people to enjoy the beauty of the nature rather than wasting energy in buying and selling things.

Develop a prose piece around a similar theme

I think this will be my last day. I can see an evil cutting machine with its menacing sharp teeth smiling to devour a new prey. I see all the human-made things around me. I have seen this place change from a beautiful world to a human world. As the last standing tree of the area, I take a deep breath and close my eyes.
Things were different when I was young. There was a small lake here. It was surrounded by green meadow. And encircling the meadow were my family members and relatives. Across the lake just opposite to me, there were two huts made up of clay brick with thatched roofs. An old human couple lived in one of the huts. The other was occupied by their daughter. This female human lived with her husband and two young male kids.
Me and my family spent days sometimes sleeping, sometimes just sucking water and nutrients from ground, sometimes thinking. And humans were not so busy either. The two male humans spent their days on the side of lake. Most of times, they were fishing. The other times, they just lied on the meadow throwing smoke out of their mouths. The female humans spent their time inside the hut. The kid humans were the regular visitors on our side. They ran from here to there and played in our shade. There was mutual harmony. The humans, we trees, the meadow, the lake, different birds and animals admired each others’ rights and lived peacefully.    
I have always wondered about humans. Even in those days, ownership pleased them. Kid humans fought over fallen fruits. The couples fought over better huts. I think this is a disease. And it spread fast.
As I stand here, the last ‘non-human-made’ thing, in a jungle of concrete building amid moving smoke guzzling vehicles, virtually recalling my life, I can say with confidence that the work of this disease stands completed. It has wiped out everything.
While my family and relatives always took pride in giving things- be it fruits, shade, fresh air. The humans affected by ownership disease always thought of getting things – wood, meat etc. Their greed increased with time. In my lifetime I have seen the huts before me transforming to a small bricked colony and then to a multistory apartment. The lake changed to first a park and then to a vehicle parking space. The meadows have been replaced by shops and roads. My family no more exists. I survived because someone started the rumour that a stone at my roots can make the wishes fulfilled if fire was burned before it. Someone stole the stone few months ago and here I am staring at a cutting machine which had taken life of my family.
Few pieces of paper notes are being exchanged between the machine driving human and one another human. How important are these in a human’s life! They keep on making these notes and against them keep on amassing things. Many times these things are not at all required. Some knowledge about show-off is necessary for the other creatures of the God to survive against these humans.
I am tired of my lone existence. The planet is full of dead things. Its good that I am going to join my family in some other universe.

Give an interpretation of the poem based on an analysis of linguistic features of the poem

William Wordsworth's "The World Is Too Much With Us" is a lyric poem in the form of a sonnet. In English, there are two types of sonnets, the Petrarchan and the Shakespearean, both with fourteen lines. Wordsworth's poem is a Petrarchan sonnet. A Petrarchan sonnet consists of an eight-line stanza (octave) and a six-line stanza (sestet). The first stanza presents a theme or problem, and the second stanza develops the theme or suggests a solution to the problem. The rhyme scheme of a Petrarchan sonnet is as follows: 
First stanza (octave): abba, abba 
Second stanza (sestet): cde, cde or another combination such as cdc, cdc. In the case of Wordsworth's poem, the combination is cd, cd. cd.
The tone is angry, modulated with sarcasm. First, the poet scolds society for devoting all its energies to material enterprises and pleasures. He announces sarcastically that he would rather be a pagan; at least then he could appreciate nature through different eyes. 
Wordsworth presents the poem in first-person plural in the first eight lines and part of the ninth, using ‘we’, ours, and us. At the end of the ninth line, he switches to first-person singular, using ‘I’. Use of first-person plural enables Wordsworth to chastise the world without seeming preachy, for he is including himself in his preach. 
Following are examples of figures of speech in the poem- 
First one is alliteration which can be seen in following lines of the poem.
Line 1: The world is too much with us
Line 2: we lay waste our powers
Line 4: We have given our hearts away
Line 5: bares her bosom
Line 6: The winds that will be howling
Use of metaphor can be seen in line 4, “We have given our hearts away”, here comparison of hearts to attention or concern or to enthusiasm or life  is being made.
Use of oxymoron is in the phrase “sordid boon”.
Personification is also used to good effect in the line, “The Sea that bares her bosom to the moon”. Here, comparison of the sea to a woman and of the moon to a person who sees the woman is made.
"The World is too Much With Us" is obsessed with nature; in fact, the central complaint of the poem is that people are so consumed by consumerism that they are no longer moved by nature. The speaker describes humanity's alienation from nature as a kind of blindness; people no longer see any similarities between nature and humankind, nor do they see anything in nature that is worth their time. ( Refer line 3 : Little we see in nature that is ours)
Wordsworth has been successful in using all the linguistic tools to convey the central theme of the poem.

Make sentences with ‘too much’, ‘getting and spending’, ‘late and soon’, ‘giving our hearts away’ and ‘a sordid boon’

Too much – Too much sunlight hurts the eyes.
Getting and spending – Trade fair is an excellent time for getting and spending.
Late and soon – In the modern working environment, stress is with us, late and soon.
Giving our hearts away – The innings played by Tendulkar made us give our hearts away in appreciation.
A sordid boon – Black money proved to be a sordid boon for the real estate market.